Friday, December 09, 2005
fine. so much abt tht "angry" post earlier on. damn pissed. aniwae, i browsed a webbie introduced by dan.
www.lovingyou.com tht was haas. it made mi realise 2 tings.
A Night To Rememberby Shompa
Hesitation in my eyes,
Apprehension in yours,
Dilemma in my mind
Decision in yours
Your charisma
My charm
Passion unbridled,
Love unconditional
Rising desire
Beating hearts
Longing eyes
Melting emotions
Together as one being
Feeling of being whole
Two bodies once
Now one soul
Promises unsaid
Trust forever
Now as one
This love eternal
done wif reading? tis poem made mi realise tht, hey! poems need nort rhyme! haas. agree? nort a single wrd rhymed. def. nort wht i like to read. hahas.
nxt up.
A Choiceby Angel2004
Screw this,
I can't do this anymore,
I can't sit back and watch,
Pretending that I don't feel anything.
Everytime I see you,
I want to hold you in my arms,
I want to kiss you forever,
And make love till it hurts.
Yet everytime I see you,
You seem just out of my reach,
Coz I don't know what you're thinking,
Or what you feel for me.
Please I need to know,
Do you feel like I do?
You hurt me the first time,
I won't let it happen again,
The pain was unbearable...
Yet I am still here,
And you have come back into my life,
I need to know why,
'Coz I am confused.
Do you want me or not?
'Coz I don't believe that,
We can just be friends...
tis 2nd one made mi realise tht, poems can sound soo "crude". at least to mi. 'make love till it hurts' oh my. is thr really anione on earth who wants to screw the othr sex by juz one look? or is lorve purely abt lookin' for a wonderful sex partner?
also, tis writer has no sense of paragraphing her poem. bet she muz be a singaporean. bloody hell singaporean 'nick'. Angel2004. wht the hell.! lols.
oh oh. and i watched anthr series of 'happy tree friends' yet agn. haas. life muz be v.boring for mi rite? happy tree frens. haas. tht creator is reli psychopathic. i can vouch for tht. but, tht's v.entertaining. lol. althou' all of the episodes i watch can't beat the one i watched years back. the v.first one i watched. hahahas!
bahhhs. tired agn. back to my WARM bed. tatas.
it's nth at all.
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